Monday, December 6, 2010

Write one paragraph to answer the question below. Be sure to use 5-7 words from last week's vocbulary list.

You've had a lot of experience with teachers, enough to know the good from the bad. If a teacher came to you looking for advice on how to make a favorable impression, what kind of advice would you give?

(Underline and place in bold each vocabulary word. I am looking for 7th grade level sentences)

At the end of your response out your first name, last name, and class

52 comments:

Shawn Alexis said...

I would tell this teacher to not hinder on telling the person that your trying to give a good impression everything that needs to be said. But do not lie. Also do not HINDER to tell them about yourself. Also you have to be GENIUNE. If you have it, tell them that you have INSOMNIA. Wear nice Clothes and tell them about your Close relative. But be honest. Its the NUMBER ONE rule. Its the GOLDEN RULE.Show no fear.

Shawn Alexis 270

Anonymous said...

I woudl have told the teacher to always tell the truth. If they are tring to make a good inpression you should wear nice CLOTHES. Do not HINDER to tell him about yourself or what you do. If they ask you questions just be GENUINE. If you follow these steps you should really impress that person.


Kemari Best 271

spouney paul said...

the advice the teacher is that i will tell her to think in her mind or figure something u goin to say.


spouney paul

272

arnold rambally said...

I would tell this teacher to not hinder on telling the person that your trying to give a good impression everything that needs to be said. But do not lie. Also do not HINDER to tell them about yourself. Also you have to be GENIUNE. If you have it, tell them that you have INSOMNIA. Wear nice Clothes and tell them about your Close relative. But be honest. Its the NUMBER ONE rule.

Arnold Rambally
270

taiyabarnes said...

I would tell the teacher she should try to wear nice CLOTHES. She should share personal things to make them fill comfortable. She should become more INTELLECTUAL. I would say she can be more GENUINE to her students when they need help and to never hinder to let them express themselfs. Taiya Barnes, 272

Anonymous said...

I would tell the teacher to give a good impression would be to wear some decent CLOTHES.Be respectful and GENUINE. Alson u have to COMMENCE a conversation.You also have to be INTELLECTUAL within your langauage.Dont be so fanatic or else they would just think your crazy. Also dont be HINDER because your would have to give a good impression.

Jenning Ballesteros class 271

Anonymous said...

also i think spouneys comment was to vague and he should use more datail and answer like that wouldnt get him any points on the STAE ELA EXAM SO i think he should fix that

Anonymous said...

If a teacher was to come to me for advice on how to make a favorable impression they would first have to have on proffessional attire/CLOTHES. Also do not HINDER to tell them about yourself or the activites that you do. If you are to be asked about your past illnesses don't be afraid to answer them. For example if you had INSOMNIA it would be ok to talk about it because if you were to be assigned to a new doctor they would ask you about your medical hisory. When your hesitant to answer a question be GENUINE. If you are asked to tell what your INTELLECTUAL is you should be able to have a lot of information on that topic because it might be you dream or your desire.

Anonymous said...

i forgot my name and class
Alyson St.omer class:271

Anonymous said...

The kind of advice iwould give a teacher is when a student is has NAUSEA sent them to the nurse.If a student is afraid to ask questions go toward the student and say"Don't HINDER be GENUINE". If,it is cold CLOSE the door and put on warm Clothes.
- Oluwatobi Kolawole
272

Anonymous said...

The advice I would give is first to always be INTELLECTUAL. Then I would tell them not to HINDER introduce yourself. You also have to wear GENUINE CLOTHES. These are all the things you need to do on the COMMENCEMENT of your first day of teaching.

Anonymous said...

-Terrence anuku
270

Anonymous said...

I would tell the teacher to be intellectual.then i would tell here to wear nice brand clothes.if this teacher wants to be awesome she has to be geniune. this teacher better not show any fear and dont hinder!!!!!!!!!!that is my advice.
fiona larmond 271

elateachermrsthall said...

Shawn, Kemari, and Arnold. Your responses sound almost the same and I am not clear as to what the advise is that you would tell the teacher.

elateachermrsthall said...

@Spouney. Your response is incomplete. Please re-read the instructions on how to respond to this post.

elateachermrsthall said...

Many of these answers are not clear or GENUINE. I asked you for your real advise and in doing so incorporate 5-7 of the vocabulary words from last week. Please re-evaluate your responses and give me 7th grade level work, thanks.

-Mrs. T. Hall

Anonymous said...

mrs.t.hall was mine good

Shuffle said...
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Shuffle said...

I would have told the teacher to always wear nice CLOTHES. Wearing something nice always make you look GENUINE to many people. Be CLOSE to people the could make you shine also. Don't HINDER to brag about yourself.Bragging shows confidence.If you have INSOMNIA don't keep it to yourself say it to other. This would make a awesome impression.
-Kingsley Samuel 270

randy said...

I will tell the teacher is do not HINDER and try to give a good impression of everything that you need to said.Also the teacher have to be GENUINE.And if you has been IMSOMNIA said it.Wear a nice CLOTHES and tell them about your CLOSE relative.When you having a NAUSEA said it and don't be scare.

RANDY RAMIREZ 272

Shuffle said...

I would tell the teacher to give a good impression would be to wear some decent CLOTHES.Be respectful and GENUINE. Alson u have to COMMENCE a conversation.You also have to be INTELLECTUAL within your langauage.Dont be so fanatic or else they would just think your crazy. Also dont be HINDER because your would have to give a good impression
Joshua Chery class 270

breadly said...

i would tell this teacher to not Hinder on telling the person that your trying to give a good idea but i think they have to be Genuine.even if you going through stuff
and she should become more INTELLECTUAL

breadly said...

i would tell this teacher to not HINDER on telling the person that you are trying to give a good idea also you have to be GENUINE. She should become more INTELLECTUAL.

GIANNI TIJNDAAL
CLASS:272

arnold rambally said...

i would tell the teacher she should try to wear nice CLOTHES. She should become more INTELLECTUAL.Also do not HINDER to tell them about yourself. Also you have to be GENIUNE.If you are to be asked about your past illnesses don't be afraid to answer them.

Arnold Rambally
270

Tai said...

I would tell the teacher not to be nervous and be GENUINE with yourself and the prson. Talk INTELLECTUAL and do not HINDER to express yourself. Present yourself with nice CLOTHES and try to talk about things CLOSE to a good subject. Do not be RAMBUNCTOUS and be yourself.

Tai Smith 271

Anonymous said...

I would tell the teacher to be very GENUINE with the person.Do not HINDER about anything that you want them to know.Make sure you wear nice CLOTHES and dont go looking raggedy as if you have a INSOMNIA problem.That's my advice to the teacher.

Javel Kellier 271

Anonymous said...

If a teacher asked me for advice on how to make a favorable impression I would tell the teacher to be very INTELLECTUAL of what she/he wears. Also they should wear CLOTHES from a nice brand. Not to be shy, but GENUINE of what she/he says or does. As well as not to HINDER on sharing something. Don’t react to something in a bad way you or the person you’re trying to make a favorable impression to, has said or done. If you do that that person will think you are FANATIC.Mainly have a conversation,without making your self fell FANATIC.

Shainya Caesar
Of Class 271

Anonymous said...

Sorry I meant to say that one time not two!!!

Anonymous said...

If a teacher asked me for advice on how to make a favorable impression I would tell the teacher to be very INTELLECTUAL of what she/he wears. Also they should wear CLOTHES from a nice brand. Not to be shy, but GENUINE of what he says or does. As well as not to HINDER on sharing something. Don’t react to something in a bad way you or the person you’re trying to make a favorable impression to, has said or done. If you do that that person will think you are FANATIC.Mainly have a conversation,without making your self fell FANATIC

Anonymous said...

My advice to the new teacher would be dont hinder at the student it is not good for you you can do better than that. I would close my door and give them more work and more homework. I would want the teacher to be genuine about herself.Most of my old teachers would wear nice clothes , just to tell you! I would like you to tell us about your fanatic work through out your yesars of teaching because it may get us exciting.!. That Is Basicly it. I HOPE we have a great year together !
Paula Dorismond
271

Anonymous said...

Mrs.T.Hall you see that kid DatDat51 he copied me word for word. Like seriously!!


Shainya Caesar

Anonymous said...

My advice to the teacher would be to wear reasonable CLOTHES. Also, she/he should be GENUINE in whatever they say. The teacher should be INTELLECTUAL. They should not HINDER to tell the kids about themselves. If they follow my advice they will have a CLOSE relstionship with the student.

Kristina Wells 271

Anonymous said...

I would tell the teacher to not be HINDER,and be GENUINE to tell the person that she/he is trying to give a good impression.Be INTELLECTUAL and that will show him/her that she's or he's a good impression.Also,if u really make a good impression,that person will be a FANATIC.For example.... if u had INSOMNIA would u be INTELLECTUAL? SO you shouldn't be hinder,its not like you have NAUSEA.

Anonymous said...

I would tell the teacher to be his/her self, and to not take the advice of RAMBUNCTIOUS children.
Obviously this teacher has been THROUGH more similar experiences than children between the ages of 12-14.
If I really had to give any advice it would be to keep the conversation open and exciting and not OMISSIOUS (verb of omission)and boring.
Your not supposed to sound like your reading a DIALOGUE, not word for word. Your conversation is supposed to spark and IGNITE a conversation between both people and a MULTITUDE of questions and excited responses.

Stevenson Delerme, 271 :3

Anonymous said...

If I was able to share some of my advices to my ELA teacher,I would have said: I have a great idea for the summaries and it is that I think the students have to be GENUINE and INTELLECTUAL.They don't have to compare the book like when they're buying CLOTHES because if its cute,you buy it.You should HINDER them from bad stuff and bad examples, and inspire them to be the best FANATIC of school.Make them be CLOSE to be the smartest student you have ever seen.
Megane A. Nacier 272

Anonymous said...

i would tell the teacher to help the child do good try your best ton set a good example so there's kids do not HINDER. also i think they should should let kids be comfortable and let them were CLOTHES.they have to be GENUINE kids though.also i think that teacher should use iINTELLECTUAL lanuge.also if the student does not fell well and has NAUSEA please send thet child to the nurse but accompined with someone because the might be telling you the truth and if you don't belive them and say no they might just throw up and you know that won't be a pretty pictyre to see.

Anonymous said...

how was mine Mrs.T.Hall
fiona larmond
271

Aliyah Patterson said...

If a teacher asked me for advice I would tell them to be very INTELLECTUAL towards the children, because it is important that you show some kind of intellect so they will respect you.CLOTHES doesn't always matter for a student to look up to them.Sometimes children might HINDER and try to get out of doing classwork, and some children enjoy it and are FANATIC about school.If you have trouble staying up all day during work, check yourself for any case of INSOMNIA because it is very iportant that the kids aren't left alone.If you follow these steps correctly,I am sure you will be just fine as a new teacher.


-Aliyah Patterson 271;-*

Anonymous said...

I would tell the teacher to wear some decent clothes. Dont be to fanantic because they will just think u crazy. Also you need to commence a conversation. Be genuine. Dont hinder important stuff.

Anonymous said...

I would tell this teacher not to HINDER certain important things to kids. To always wear nice ClOTHES. Also i would say to always CLOSE the door when kids are taking a test.To be GENUINE to kids to keep up smiles.Last but not least to act INTELLECTUAL by using big words to impress student.

NEW ERA said...

If a teacher had came to me looking for advice for how to make a favrorable inspression i would say you need to be able to be a very nice GENIUNE person of other kids where there kind of CLOTHES do not HINDER to tell them about yourself do not CLOSE the door hard teach the kids to be INTELLECTUAL
clifford philias 272

Unknown said...

i would tell this teacher to not hinder on telling a person that ur trying to give a good impression everything.

Unknown said...

I would tell the teacher to not HINDER and to just be herself. Be GENUINE to the person you are trying to impress so they can get to know you better for you are very INTELLECTUAL. Wear nice CLOTHES that you give them the right idea. And i hope in the end you have hopefully give them a CLOSE idea of the type of impression you were tying to give them.
Brianna Merilus 271

Anonymous said...

At the COMMENCEMENT of the advice.I would tell him or her to get CLOSE to the students.were some nice CLOTHES so the students would think your nice.Don't HINDER be confident. Also be very INTELLECTUAL with them

Ezekiel Bovell
271

Anonymous said...

Some advice I would give to teachers is to be more intellectual and genuine to the students.Also,to set a good name for you,wear nice clothing to school.You will have a lot of respect coming to you.If a student is being bad in your class,don't hinder to call his/her parents.If he/she decides to walk out the room,don't hinder to close the door on them and don't let them back in without a specific rule like getting your parent/guardian up to school.If you have any secrets,you can tell it to a student or a teacher/employee.For example,lets say you have insomnia,you will have trouble talking about it,so tell it to somebody close to you.That's the advice I would give to teachers.

Anonymous said...

By the way,this is Isaiah Taylor from class 270

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Joshua Weller said...

I would tell the teacher to be GENUINE not to be something he/she not. Do not let the MULTITUDE of kids HINDER you from teaching a lesson. Make you get your rest you do not want to suffer from INSOMNIA.Wear nice CLOTHES it will be a great influence on them.

Anonymous said...

My name is Jade Compton from class 271 and this question can really help us and to show you how much we know and our INTELLECTUAL with our experiences with you, as our teacher. I have had a lot of experiences with my teacher, enough to know the good from the bad, meanig that I should know by now what the teacher sholdn't expect, and shouldn't expect from me. If a teacher came up to me looking for advice on how to make a favorable expression, the advice I would give him/her is that they soul wear appropiate CLOTHES. I addition to that, I would tell him/her to do not HINDER, meaning to do not stop the process of expressing yourself. You shold not be afaid to lecture about yourself. You would want to hide all your faults and you want to present the best of you to a person that you are trying to attract. Also an advice I would the teacher is to ask questions. When asking question you might find out more about the situation. Also meaning you sholud be FANATIC about something. Furthermore, I would tell her/him to be GENUINE and be real with herself/himself. Along with that I would tell him/her if the teacher would have trouble staying up all day during work, they would have to check yourself for any case of INSOMNIA. You would not be able to focus on the situation. This is my advice for you!
-Jade Compton 271 :-)

Unknown said...

In order 2 be a good teacher like Mrs.Thall U have 2 have to be smoove like mrs.thall which means u have to wear fresh CLOTHES don't wear the same thing everyweek u also can't be HINDER to tell the class about your self she would also have to be GENUINE and INTELLECTUAL you should also keep the ones that give you the most problems CLOSE because you might be able to find out why they give you such a hard time and when u do u can fix that problem and right there that's another student that thinks your cool.

Anfernee SmOov. Brereton LXIVII 271

Unknown said...

i would tell the teacher to have a ORGANIC soul.and to CLOSE the door for the education.maybe even have a dress down day for some trips.so we can wear comfortable CLOTHES.she should not be HINDER everything alrigth.

Shawn Alexis said...

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