Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Write at least 3 paragraphs to answer the question below. Use all 10 of last week's vocabulary words.

Is bullying a problem in your school? How does your school deal with it? Do you think that this approach is effective? What additional recommendations would you suggest? Please answer in clear, complete, and cohesive sentences. I would like at least 3 paragraphs. Please add detailed information to support your answer. Do not mention any one's name in your example.

(Capitalize each vocabulary word. I am looking for 7th grade level sentences)

35 comments:

Unknown said...

Yes because students gets hurt.The bullies bully because they don't have any friends.They bully to get attention.They also bully because they are two times older. They always bully the people who are afraid of them.Bullies are unfriendly and they might hurt other people feelings.bullies people who are also much smarter than them.They bully people smarter than thembecause they know they will get better jobs than them. Bullies bother other people because they know that they are doing better than them in school.So bullies whats to stop the other people from reaching their goal.

elateachermrsthall said...

@Alphaoumar. You must include your vocabulary words from last week into your posting. Your posting must also be 3 pragrapghs. Please read the instructions carefully.

-Mrs. T. Hall

Anonymous said...

Yes bullying is a problem in our school. We deal with them by staying out of there way. i think this is effectiive because if your not in there way they wont bother you.if they want to bother you tell a teacher.I think this way is effective because it stopd them from hurting you. I suggest that you shouldn't go near a bully no matter what.

Shawn Alexis said...

I cannot speak for anybody but bullying is not a problem for me. But if anyone has been bullyed and has an adult, the bullier would probably be punished. But physical bullying has been part of the problem. Not all of the problem.
Maybe one day your on Facebook and someone hops in on your conversation and starts TO thearten you. This things are NON FICTION. These happen TOO much times. The phyiscal bullying has happened to me TWO times and both times I got suspended.

Anonymous said...

Sometimes bullying does happen in my school. If someone is bullied they would tell the dean and the dean will call the persons house. Bulling is a problem in schools because kids can get hurt and that will set a bad notice on the school. Some people that bully kids are TWO times their age. For example a bully would bully a smarter kid to get homeowrk done and to learn vocabulary like STANZA, NON FICTION, BIBLOGRAPHY. A way to avoid bullys is to not make eye contact and to ignore anything they say to you so can't get hurt.

Anonymous said...

Yes bullying is a problem. Students get hurt. Also it will set bad names about the school. Also bullies are TWO times older. They bully smart people that knows their vocabulary words like STANZA, TO,SCAN,NONFICTION,TOO, AUTOBIOGRAPHY,BIBLIOGRAPHY, ONOMATOPOEIA,and,CONNOTATION. Bullies are unfriendly and they hurt other peoples fellings. Bullies bother other people because they know that they are not going to get far in life. Also the people that get bully by bullies are reaching their goals. Also bullies knows that they're not doing well in school and the smart kids are doing well in school. Bullies bully other people because they are afraid of them.

Anonymous said...

oh mathew pearson 271

randy said...

Yes bullying is a problem in our school.We deal with them by staying out of they way and not talking TO them.Also bullys are TWO times your age.I think that is effective because if you not in their way they won't bother you if you are in their way and you talking bad TO them they are going to start bullying you,bullys bother TO many people because does people get in they way.Sometimes bullys are going TO start writing a BIBLIOGRAPHY about you and the thing that they would about you would be NON-FICTION and they would write CONNOTATION thing TOO if one time you start talking TO them they are going to start telling you a big STANZA of word.The thing that a suggest is when the bullys are going to make something about you the thing that you have to do is SCAN the thing that they are going to do to you and never write an AUTOBIOGRAPHY about a bully and never try to told them a ONOMATOPOEIA of what they talk I sugest all of this to people.

randy said...

RANDY RAMIREZ 272

elateachermrsthall said...

As I am reading these comments, none of them make any sense. I will not give credit for comments that make no sense. That is why you have 3 paragraphs that you have to write in order for this to make sense. I do not want to read anything about "learning vocabulary words such as ...." because that makes no sense. I am looking forward to reading everyone's new responses.

arnold rambally said...

yes i think bullying is a problem.i think it is a problem because it cause kid to kill there self.some prants need to find out if there child is being bully.i think that kids how do that sould stop.they should stop because it can be bad for u.
i think that if you bully your cause death into people family.they dont know they could go to jail for that.they may think it is a joke .but it is not it is a thing that is not a joke.they will want money they should just say no they should think and say that could be me getting bully so think before u do something.

Anonymous said...

Yes bulling is a problem in all schools. Almost everybody have to deal with it. Perhaps a teacher is asking u to find the meaning of nonfiction, autobiography, onomatopoeia, and stanza.
Some kid can just tell u to do it for him and he will give u two dollars u might do it or u don't want any of Ur friends to do it too or he might treating u.

Anonymous said...

dis is joseph 270

Justin "The Joker" Delerme said...

I think bullying is a very serious problem in our school.
Bullying is almost like a virus, other people bully because they think the one doing the bullying is funny so to try to be more like there friend they bully too.
And on, and on, and on.
There are two types of bullies. Bullies who bully because they feel they are lacking something the other person has and feel that if they bully the person they and they person would be equal.
There are also the bullies who just bully to relate to their friends(other bullies).
And finally, we come to the dumb bullies. Dumb bullies are just the kids are so ridiculious un-intelligent that they cannot comprehend words such as STANZA, TO,SCAN,NONFICTION,TOO, AUTOBIOGRAPHY,BIBLIOGRAPHY, ONOMATOPOEIA,and,CONNOTATION.
I admit these words may be a little hard but these bullies deserve this kind appreciation because they basically verbally and emotionally abuse students everyday because they can and they think it's funny.


Justin Delerme, 271 :3

Anonymous said...

Bullying is a very bad problem that ever school faces.There is always somebody that thinks that they are all that and try TO bully smaller kids.This person is going to try and make these kids suffer evey WEEK of school knowing that they are not going to fight back.
these bullies are not always TWO times their age thjey are sometimes in there own class so they can see who is WEAK or not.This ANTAGONIST sometimes get it from somebody else that taught it to them which is like a CHARACTER-TRAIT.They think that bullying is something good and would be BENEFICIAL.Most of these bullies are people that think they are cool and try to be MOTIF and use horrible PRONUNCIATION.They would try to make any thing an ABBREVIATION and they would never use SALUTATION.
The best thing for these children that are getting bullied are to tell anybody and not keep it to themselves. and stop being scared. These bllies always have plans and ARCHITECHURAL WORK.

Anonymous said...

fiona larmond 271

Anonymous said...

Bulling in my school is a serious problem. A lot of kids get into a bunch of fights. Sometimes only TWO people fight each other or it would be three because people think its a joke.Kids in my school go TO their teachers to write that person up for harrasing them. Kids that do this shows the staff that tht child is into their work. Some kids might be influenced in what that child mught be doing and they will do the same TOO.
The school has many ways of handleing this problem. The bullies teacher might give them a NON-FICTION or a AUTOBIOGRAPHY to read while they are in detention. On some occasion the teacher would give them an essay to do and they would have to write a BIBLIOGRAPHY or they might have to SCAN a text to get a understanding of what its going to be about.
Many people notice that a school is where that bullies heart is a CONNOTATION of how most people feel about their school. They would be so focused on bulling people that they dont know what the word ONOMATOPOEIA is. they dont even know that a STANZA is located in a poem!!!! How crazy is that!

Anonymous said...

Alyson St.omer 271

Elischa Edouard said...

In my school there are a lot and TOO many bullies in my school. The school got TO do something about it. I don't think that there is nothing that they are doing now about it . There are TWO things I would like to tell them 1st I want to tell them to SCAN the hole area after and school.
It's like a NON -FICTION BIBLIOGRAPHY where the bully have to get a security guard his friend and one time he is going to give the security guard an AUTOBIOGRAPHY of him and in it he explain what makes him bully kids and maybe the kids because they are scared they are going to the ONOMATOPOEIA of it.
I think that the school should also make a STANZA so that they could know always what to do. I also think that there should be a CONNOTATION for them.
Elischa Edouard 272

Anonymous said...

Bullying is a problem in school, also bully bullies people because they think that they are WEAK and will not stand up,and its not BENEFICIAL for the adults to ignore bullying, luckily they dont.My school deal with it by talking to the student who is being bullied to calm down, relax and deals with it. Which i think that approach is effective, because by calming the student, they will realize that next time thy are being bullied and is mad they will learn to cal themselves down. The recommendations i suggest is that Bullies are ANTAGONIST,They are WEAK because just because they are bigger than you they will not dare pick on someone their size, so you have to defend yourself and if you cant stay away from that bully as far as you can.

ANDREW PACAUD
CLASS 270

Jenning213 said...

Bullying is not really a problem in my school.In my school they handle it by having cameras and sercureity guards all over the school. Also students usally defend themselves.But in general bulling is a problem in other schools.First bullies usally bully other kids TO get attention of some sort.There are many way to stop bulling in schools.
I suggest that schools scan hallways.And if they see anything thing they should make a ONOMATOPEOA.TWO staff should ask students if they are getting bullied by other students.i think this aprroch will be affective because most bullies would be afraid to get in trouble.
In my opinion i dont think students should not be bullied. I think this because even if they might be different from other kids.Even if you dont like them it dosent mean you have the right to bully other kids.And if u were them u would not like to be bullied as well so take that to not

Jenning213 said...

ooo i 4got jenning ballesteros 271

Unknown said...

bullying is a problem in my school.the school deals with it by giving them inhouse or suspension but maily nothing.no i do not think that this aproche is effective.i suggest that every kidd that gets bullide report that person to the principle and tell your perent or gurdien.
Ketheluyn BOlling

Anonymous said...

Our school is a safe environment but the students can go over the top with vilance. Many students get bulled every day of a WEEK. Teachers try to stop it but they cant. They think they have stoped the beef between the bullie and the student but they didnt. When school is dimiss the bully will follow the student home and harais them. Now what can we do to stop these bullies to make students fell safe?
If a grown up see a student bullying another student they would be put in In-House or get suspended. I think they should do more because the bullies will still countinue what they are doing. Some people have killed there self because they coudnt take it anymore. That is when the bullies want to say im sorry about everything i have done to you. No that is not fair to the person who just lost thier life.
I personally think that this problem is effective. I say this because thousands of kids get bullied every school day or everyday. There can be bullies at your house, school, and in the street. There is noting you can do to stop them.
If you are getting bullied you should tell your parent, a teacher, just tell someone. The best thing TO do is not go near the bullie and ignore it.
If a student wrote a NON-FICTION, AUTOBIOGRAPHY, BIBLIOGRAPHY a poem With TWO STANZA people will be shock of what that child went through. So please stop bulling one another its not healthy.

Paula Dorismond 271

Tai said...

Yes, bullying is a problem in my school. People will bully probably because they want attention and they thinking picking on somebody is a way TO get attention. Many students get bullied and if a student tells a teacher, the bully will probably take the bullying somewhere else, like the schoolyard or cafeteria. Bullies will hurt other children.

My school deals with bullying by positioning cameras nearly all over the school. There are more than TWO teachers who SCAN the hallways and keep things under control while the security guards keep things under control TOO.

I think that these approachs are effective in controling problems. These are effective because there are a lot of NON-FICTION, AUTO BIOGRAPHY and BIBLIOGRAPHY books about people getting bullied. Bullies might not even know how to spell word like ONOMATOPEIA OR CONNOTATION but they focus and bothering others. There are even STANZAS about bulling so we ned to help end bulling now

Tai said...

Tai Smith :271

Unknown said...

Bullying is a problem in my school. Some students think they are better than other students because of TWO major petty reasons. One because they might be smarter than them so they are considered nerds. Also because they feel they are better than other students because they may have more money than them.
The teachers/my school handles bullying by suspending students, giving them in house and detention or by writing them up. I believe that this is a good way to handle bullying. This way that get a lesson and have a feeling of the CONNOTATION of the hurt they are putting on others.
TO also help students that have been bullied some write AUTOBIOGRAPHIES of their experiences to let others know that their feelings are NON-FICTION and that bullies need TO stop what they are doing. Them TOO have feelings and they need to recognize that. The BIBLIOGRAPHY of the lives these bullies are creating for kids are hurtful and make students feel that they have to be scared. Bullying is not the answer and bullies need to realize the hurt they are putting on others.
-Brianna Merilus 271

Joshua Weller said...

yes because many kids in school get pick on. At least TWO a day . I TOO was getting bulling. the school is doing some what of a good job.
The problem is that bullies don't take time to read NON-FICTION books or STANZA from a poem. They don't show SALUTATION to the teachers.
The students they bully know about many people AUTOBIOGRAPHY & the BIBLIOGRAPHY to a website. The bullies don't know the ABERRATION to doctor or what ONOMATOPOEIA is. or that that zip is a CONNOTATION. bulling is bad not do it.

Shuffle said...

Bullying is a problem in school in many ways. People can be bullied by one or TWO people. Bullying can change the view of people life. Many people write NON-FICTION or AUTOBIOGRAPHY of their encounter.Schools should SCAN the floors and have a guard by each exit and double doors. The guards should stop the bulling. If students see they should stop it TOO.
Also the students should study books of others people life because they would know what to do when something of that sort happens. Students can do BIBLIOGRAPHY to what they read. Maybe do a poem each STANZA should have a rule against. This is effective because there is someone there everywhere you go and the students or people could avoid it.
Also try to use large words so the bully would not understand the content coming out of your mouth like CONNOTATION,and ONOMATOPOEIA. The last rule never show fear bullies would walk away when they see your not a force to be messed with.
-Kingsley Samuel 270

Anonymous said...

Bullying is a problem in my school. Some students think they have the right of abusing people in different ways. For example they think they have the right TO hit other people, make fun of them, tease them and force them to do things. These bullies think there big and bad when there really not. They are doing what they are doing because they are jealous of the of the people their bullying. The bully's are jealous of them because there smarter and better then them.
I attend a school called I.S.68 Bildersee. At my school they have a vey good way of dealing with bullies. One there is always more than one teacher SCANNING through the hallways, whereas nearby are security guards keeping things under control TOO. They also give in house where the bullies attend in a room in the basement held hostage for the whole day doing plenty of work. TWO they get phone calls home and detention after with a minimum of 1 hour after school. The worst thing is to get out of school suspension for months. These disciplinarians’ taking part is the way they learn their lesson and have a feeling of the CONNOTATION of the harm they are resting on others. This approach is very effective because it teaches the mean, jealous, wanna be bullies a good lesson. Some terrified people who were bullied threw out their life write AUTOBIAGRAPHIES (which are NON-FICTION) about their whole life being bullied, which gives other people a better understanding of he/she(s) life.
I have a few supplementary recommendations I would like to suggest. If you a student that is getting bullied tell your guardians or dean at your school. You can also contact police. Try to stay away from the bullies. Don’t give any eye contact with the bully. They don’t even know the different onomatopoeias that the people they are bulling end up with. Some bully should write a true BIBILOGRAPHY poem with two STANZA’S on how they are sorry. In there poem they should include ONOMAOTOPIEAS too.

Shainya Caesar
Of Class 271

Anonymous said...

I typed it in paragraph form but it came out like that!

Unknown said...

i can't say anyone bullying ,i don't see it happening. but this is NON-FICTION it really happens.my school deals with this by separating the TWO of them or in-house,or gym detention.yes it does, TO them them and also TOO the parent/guardian of them. Because ifthst happen then the TWO indivials won't get TO socailize. they can only SCAN though books looking for the word ONOMATOPEIA.or TO write an a AUTO BIOGRAPHY or even a BIBLIOGRAPHY . And they won't even get gym and the parents wouldn't like this for their children.some suggestion to stop the bullying is for the bully to present a poem with a certain amont of STANZAto the kid. also i connationagree that bullying should stop.

Anonymous said...

Most people can remember some experience with a bully while growing up. Unfortunately, bullies still cause problems and damage TO other students. Bullying is such a big problem in my school. There are many reasons why students bully other people. They may see it as a way of being popular, or making themselves look tough and in charge. Some bullies do it to get attention or things, or to make other people afraid of them. Others might be jealous of the person they are bullying. They may be being bullied themselves. Some bullies may not even understand how wrong their behavior is and how it makes the person being bullied, feel. In addition to that, some young people are bullied for no particular reason, but sometimes it's because they are different in some way - perhaps it's the color of their skin, the way they talk, their size, or their name. Sometimes young people are bullied because they look like they won't stand up for themselves.
Well, my school does try to deal with the bulling. For students, who bully other people get consequences. If there were TWO or more bullies in this school, it would be very dangerous for those small and sensitive students who can stand up for themselves. There have been some AUTOBIOGRAPHIES of bullies who threaten or beat up other students. In some STANZA’S or parts, of those stories tells you the cases these bullies were in, which has a suggested CONNOTATION Those students would probably get a phone call to their parents, or they would probably get a suspension, or might even get sent to a certain school, for a certain amount of time for their behavior. Not often, but some of those bullies might get away with it. Teachers and staff SCAN the hallways for any problems and even there are cameras located all over the school to secure the hallways, lunchroom, classrooms and other areas of the school for the student’s safety. The principal or the assistant principals would be watching, TOO. If there was to be bullying or even a fight, they would be watching. There are also security guards to control that.
I think that this approach is effective, because there are so many younger students getting hurt, because of this, which gets some many parents angry. Those who bully people get in some trouble with the teacher and principals and in some situation with parents. Then the students being bullied should have to write a NON-FICTION statement about the case. These cases appear in books and in advertisements about stop the bullying. In those books, includes BIBLIOGRAPHIES and other sources about bullying other students in school. Then the bullies with soon regret what they have done and be sorry for it. It results to the crying and the weeping sounds, which is ONOMATOPOEIA.
~Jade Compton 271 =]

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angelelan98 said...

Yes, bullying is kinda a problem in my school.Bullies like to pick on other kids that are smaller then them.They might have trouble at home. They also might have trouble with their schoolwork TOO.They probably dont know what a NON-FICTION text is, and what a BIBLOGRAPHY, or what an AUTOBIOGRAPHY.They also might not know what the words CONNOTATION,OMATOPOEIA, and STANZA means.
Bullies are mean people.They also are very unfriendly.Bulliesalso bully people to attention.Bullying isnt that big in my school.But we still have bullies.All schools have least have one bully.Sometimes its a group of students that are bullies.
Bullying really infects people.Some people even kill themselves over bullying. Every school should get a bully SCAN. -Ms.McG. 271